Comments on: Trouble in Elbeyn http://www.kalyr.co.uk/rpg/2011/08/01/trouble-in-elbeyn/ Enter a world of arcane technology, strange mental powers, mysterious alien races, intrigue and conflict; a land on the brink of change as the old order passes. Sun, 23 Oct 2011 21:38:30 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: TimHall http://www.kalyr.co.uk/rpg/2011/08/01/trouble-in-elbeyn/#comment-259 TimHall Mon, 01 Aug 2011 21:53:41 +0000 http://www.kalyr.co.uk/rpg/?p=375#comment-259 You're probably right, but it is a first draft - only wrote it this afternoon. Thinking of changing the murder weapon from a blade to some kind of beam weapon. You’re probably right, but it is a first draft – only wrote it this afternoon.

Thinking of changing the murder weapon from a blade to some kind of beam weapon.

]]> By: Sean http://www.kalyr.co.uk/rpg/2011/08/01/trouble-in-elbeyn/#comment-258 Sean Mon, 01 Aug 2011 21:40:08 +0000 http://www.kalyr.co.uk/rpg/?p=375#comment-258 I really like this passage, many good things from the fact that you talk about one guild being meritocratic and others not. I would choose a different word in the last paragraph for moment. It works, but I think from the context the narrator/writer is talking of the irregularities over a longer period. Each passing hour, each passing day, what ever suits what you want to say. Nice one. I really like this passage, many good things from the fact that you talk about one guild being meritocratic and others not. I would choose a different word in the last paragraph for moment. It works, but I think from the context the narrator/writer is talking of the irregularities over a longer period. Each passing hour, each passing day, what ever suits what you want to say. Nice one.

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